http://www.bahamas-travel.org/bahamas-beach-sunsets/
does this make sense? 10 points best answer!?
i am doing this project, but i am not sure if this paragraph makes sense, if not can u help me?
the bahamas a beautiful place and the best vacation spot ever. You can find miles of beaches combined with caves, rain forest, and hills, and you have never seen such an exiting sunset until you have seen it set over the Atlantic Ocean. The Bahamas is such a favorite vacation destination because of its beaches and entertainment.
does it make sense? btw this in the introduction paragraph
The Bahamas is a beautiful location and one of the best vacation spots. One can find long stretches of beaches along with caves, rain forest, and lush hills. Seeing the sun set over the Atlantic Ocean is one of the most breath-taking experiences ever. The main reasons contributing to this destination’s popularity are the beaches and constant entertainment.
I just changed the grammar and switched a few words around, so it made more sense. Hope you don’t mind…hope this helps, and good luck!! It’s really good, I like your use of descriptive words. 
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